1. Opening shot is out of focus - could possibly have it fading in using focus? 2. You'll need to make sure that the edits are tight to the tempo (for example, the opening shots need to be edited to the beginning of each bar of the melody) 3. There are a lot of place-holders here - I'm assuming you've got most of this footage shot now? I could really do with seeing a close to final version... 4. Some of the shots of the guy in the brown coat in the woods catch him starting his move; they need to be edited to start a little later 5. Not quite sure there's enough of Charlotte performing - could do with seeing her a little more (I assume that there are more vocals later in the song?)
1. Opening shot is out of focus - could possibly have it fading in using focus?
ReplyDelete2. You'll need to make sure that the edits are tight to the tempo (for example, the opening shots need to be edited to the beginning of each bar of the melody)
3. There are a lot of place-holders here - I'm assuming you've got most of this footage shot now? I could really do with seeing a close to final version...
4. Some of the shots of the guy in the brown coat in the woods catch him starting his move; they need to be edited to start a little later
5. Not quite sure there's enough of Charlotte performing - could do with seeing her a little more (I assume that there are more vocals later in the song?)